Sunday, August 17, 2008

you

you
to grab you
i want to grab you
telling me how badly i want to grab you
blood gushes through my veins telling me how badly i want to grab you
my stomach leaps as blood gushes through my veins telling me how badly i want to grab you
blood, how badly, my stomach, telling me, grab you, how badly, gushes through, i want, how badly

3 comments:

doll said...

I love the simple construction of this poem conveying so strongly the pulsing need to grab her.

Deity said...

doll,
poems that have a divergent form are a big stimulation for me.

i'm glad its simplicity conveyed what is sometimes not so simple a need.

moonheart said...

Beautiful mantra!